Muhahahaha!!!! I'm dabbling once again in the realms of writing. I should stick to poetry, which I'm good at, instead of fiction, which I'm not. Either way here's something I played with for a little while this afternoon. It's the beginnings of what seems to be the usual hardboiled detective schtick (intentionally so, and intentionally cliche, but I want to go somewhere different with it.) In short, the cheese is deliberate. I'd like to turn it into a short story twisting the usual by ma...